Slice of Life by Dyshawn L.

Dyshawn Lawton                                                                     4-17-15

        

Context & Reflection 

I picked a slice of life because I thought it was the easiest thing to pick.  A Slice of life is 

descriptive writing so I can practice writing more descriptively. I improved writing piece below by adding more words and fixing grammar mistakes.

SLICE OF LIFE FIGHT      

  It was a nice summer day, We were in the gymnasium at GIAC, down stairs by the lobby area where everyone, almost everyone, checks in.  All of a sudden I saw two kids arguing.  I was used to people arguing, so I just ignored them. But this time around something seemed peculiar. Things started to get serious.  People were starting to step back in formation as if they were in the military. Next thing I knew, I was trying to hold somebody back with a single extended arm and clenched fist. I felt his hot, sweaty T--shirt against my hand.  As the howls in the air became more intense I started to to scream “COUNSELOR.”  Like monster trucks, all of the counselors came rolling in.  But at this point not even the counselors could break this up. More kids started to join the fight. It took a while but the counselors finally got them to settle down and asked each one of us what happened to start the fight but when they were done interrogating people the counselor looked at me and grabbed me with force as if she won the first prize in body lifting  when she was 6 years old.  When she was done dragging me I ended up in a small room that contained than a chair and desk it looked like a room where a guidance counselor who try to help someone.  and by the way she Hello my name is Dyshawn and I go to dewitt middle school. I’m in 7th grade ame to write about this is because  

                                                     ABOUT THE AUTHOR

            Hello my name is Dyshawn, I go to Dewitt Middle School. I think that I motivated more this year but I also think i had a lot of distractions this year. I made a better relationship with my teachers. I really want to do better next year in 8th grade to make myself happy and my mom happy too. Well hope you enjoyed my quick slice of life (paragraph story).